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Offline znqn

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Can anybody help me with my English?
« on: March 11, 2015, 12:39:07 PM »
 Hello! I have very bad know English. Now I use a translator online. But I want to be alone offers every day (for practice). Here is my account on Lang 8 http://lang-8.com/1169167 (where you can fix broken).
Just have an account on Facebook https://www.facebook.com/profile.php?id=100001509283901. Facebook is very rare, because in Russian popular Vkontakte. I will be glad to meet new people. :)

About Me: I am Russian. I live in Russia. I'm single. I love music, playing guitar, reading books. I believe in God. Learn English is my hobby. I have my own small business. I refill cartridges printers. I have a cat named Pirate. :)

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Re: Can anybody help me with my English?
« Reply #1 on: March 11, 2015, 12:54:55 PM »
Oops, looks like I'm not the topic where it is necessary posted.

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Re: Can anybody help me with my English?
« Reply #2 on: March 12, 2015, 08:59:47 AM »
Hello! I have very bad know English. Now I use a translator online. But I want to be alone offers every day (for practice). Here is my account on Lang 8 http://lang-8.com/1169167 (where you can fix broken).
Just have an account on Facebook https://www.facebook.com/profile.php?id=100001509283901. Facebook is very rare, because in Russian popular Vkontakte. I will be glad to meet new people. :)
About Me: I am Russian. I live in Russia. I'm single. I love music, playing guitar, reading books. I believe in God. Learn English is my hobby. I have my own small business. I refill cartridges printers. I have a cat named Pirate. :)

I will put your above sentences into proper English:

Hello! My English is poor. I am now using an online translator. But I want to practice every day. The following is my account, Lang 8 http://lang-8.com/1169167.
I recently got an account of Facebook which is https://www.facebook.com/profile.php?id=100001509283901.
In Russia we use Vkontakte more often than Facebook.  I will be happy to meet new people :)
I am a Russian, currently living in Russia. I am a bachelor. I love music, playing guitar and reading. I believe in God. Learning English is my hobby. I have my own small business. I refill cartridges for printers. I have a cat named Pirate.

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That above is your sentences in proper English.  Some of it I did not understand, like "but I want to be alone offers" made no sense to me so I did not put it in my translation. It could mean that you are studying English alone, by yourself, but I was not sure so I left it out. Sorry. Other than that, your English is fairly good. We have a saying here, "Practice makes perfect", so keep on practicing.
I am not going to go to your websites in Russia and I do not like Facebook, but will deal with you in this Orthodox Forum, just not as often as you wish. :)
Please, tell us your name.
Thank you,
=Len
« Last Edit: March 12, 2015, 09:01:02 AM by LenInSebastopol »
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